Sunday, February 11, 2024

Episode 40.7 transcription - C.L. Moore - "Greater than Gods" (1939)

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non-spoiler discussion

Gretchen:

Hello, you are listening to Chrononauts, a science fiction literature history podcast. This month we are covering the July 1939 issue of Astounding. Please check out the other segments for the previous stories in this magazine, but this segment is covering the final work in this issue by C.L. Moore.

We have covered Moore previously on this podcast when looking at her story "Vintage Season". The discussion of that story and Moore's background can be found in the third part of our 34th episode covering three works that deal with time travel. This story, in the issue of astounding though, is "Greater than Gods", which I really enjoyed. I think I still prefer "Vintage Season", but this one was a really good story.

Nate:

Yeah, I think "Vintage Season" is slightly better, but I definitely like this one a lot too. She just has a really good prose style.

JM:

She does. I think that, yeah, that's kind of what makes this good, is that it's written really well. I do think it sort of falls into this overly deterministic mindset that I'm a little bit like not a fan of, but it's not necessarily that Moore is 100 percent on board with that either, I don't think, so I don't know. It works really well because of how well it's written, I think. This is probably, out of all the stories, she probably does have the best prose.

Gretchen:

Yeah, I mean, I think that the way Moore is able to convey emotion and the way that things affect people is really great.

JM:

Yeah, and she's able to convey emotions in a way that not many of the other authors do, or they maybe just chose not to. She just does it naturally, I mean, I don't mean to be like, oh, that's because she's a woman, but it just seems like there's this kind of tendency that she has to really focus on the emotions that the characters are feeling, more so than some of her contemporaries.

Nate:

Certainly, a good chunk of the story is spent with one of the characters in a state of emotional distress just racking his brains about what is he going to do.

Gretchen:

Yeah.

JM:

Yeah, there's a lot of that in this, it's pretty much all through, right? It's this emotional turmoil for this one poor guy who's in this literal impasse, and it's a very strange situation, but the way that she writes it definitely, it reminisces to some other, I guess, stories where somebody sort of gets shown two different alternative paths and they get to choose which one to take, and they don't necessarily know which one's better. I don't know, I feel like I've seen this in more recent science fiction movies and stuff like that. I can't really think of too many examples, but Gretchen, you were saying you watched Donnie Darko recently, and I sort of remember getting that feeling from it, I guess. It's been a long time since I watched it, but yeah, it seems more mystical too, like almost, there's no reason for these people to connect except that they are linked by biology somehow, and there's been this kind of telepathic or technological developments in the future that make it possible for them to connect, which is really interesting because it's like on one level, it's the kind of thing where I personally would balk at writing something where those kind of connections happen, but she's able to explain it in a way that makes it real true and you want to keep reading it.

Gretchen:

Yeah, I think besides the emotional distress, I also really enjoy the more positive emotions that are shown in this work, like we'll get into it a little more, but the love and affection that's kind of shown between characters in this is also just really well done and pretty touching, I think.

JM:

Yeah, for sure, and even whatever side of the coin that we might decide is less attractive than the other, and she kind of leaves it open actually as to which one is not as attractive. She makes it pretty clear that either one is a bit extreme, I think, but like whichever side you choose, Moore still expresses affection for the people in that framework, like both the distant son and the distant daughter, right, like he's kind of loves them both, but he can't help it somehow, and even though one may be, I guess, overly sibyllic, the other one overly militaristic, he still appreciates them both. So yeah.

Gretchen:

Thinking about a couple of comparisons, and I think it's a pretty interesting one to think about, "Alas, all Thinking" when reading this. It's one that really came to mind when I was going through the story.

Nate:

Yeah, definitely.

JM:

Yeah.

Nate:

Anything with that kind of future projection of humanity and the directions that it may take over. I guess it didn't say how many generations, but it certainly implied that it's like a lot.

JM:

A long time. Yeah. I do think the ending, it's kind of the decision that has to be made, but at the same time, it's a little funny, and I don't know if it's just funny to me, but we'll get there when we talk about that.

Nate:

I think she was definitely going with humor for that one, and I was not entirely sure of what twist she was going to put on at the end. We'll talk about it when we get there. I thought she might have gone in a different direction.

JM:

Oh, okay. Interesting. Yeah.

Gretchen:

Yeah, I didn't expect the direction it took, but I'm sure she meant it to be a humorous ending, you know?

Nate:

Yeah, because it is.

Gretchen:

Yeah. It feels very similar to some of the other kind of zinger endings that you get in these pulps.

JM:

Yeah. Okay. I'm glad I'm not the only one that is. Yeah. Am I supposed to think that's funny? I'm not sure. Yeah. Okay. Cool.

Gretchen:

I think it does work. I think it's a funny ending. It does feel strange that it does, since you saw this very emotional story. Yeah.

JM:

After all this emotional tumult, it feels kind of... Yeah. Anyway, we better just... Now we're just sounding vague, so I guess we better... This is probably another one where it's best to talk about it more afterwards, because then you really... Yeah.

Gretchen:

It's a lot easier to talk about it once you have all the pieces.

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spoiler plot summary and spoiler discussion

Gretchen:

We open on 23rd Century Doctor Bill Cory, another Bill in the stories I'm summarizing, writing a letter to one of two women he can't decide between to marry. The two women are Dr. Marta Mayhew and Sallie Carlisle, the latter of whom he decides to address in his letter before he's interrupted by a visit from a friend.

JM:

Yeah, this guy's such a cad, isn't he? Yeah. It's like looking at the two women pictures, like, huh, which one?

Gretchen:

Yeah.

JM:

It's really funny. She makes it seem like it's not like the Rocklynne story where it's almost like a little bit. Okay, you're using like casually sexist language to describe this, but it's not really like that in this, even though it's that kind of situation, where you have like a really, I don't know, like a man who's just kind of like undecided and stringing multiple women along.

Gretchen:

Well, at least, you know, he does refer to their personalities and like who they are as people a bit more, which I think it makes it a little more palatable.

Nate:

And it never feels like gawking and leering, which is what the Rocklynne definitely did.

Gretchen:

Yeah.

JM:

Yeah, sure.

Gretchen:

Yes. He's addressing this letter before he's interrupted by a visit from a friend, Dr. Charles Ashley, who heads what's called the Telepathy House of Science City. Seeing Bill's romantic indecision, Charles muses on his possible futures with each woman and then about futures in general, calling the futures an infinite reservoir of an infinite number of futures, each of them fixed yet malleable as clay. He considers the idea of a possibility plane where all futures that result from every decision exist simultaneously and how powerful one could be if they could access that plane, like a god. Bill brushes off all the speculating, even as Charles leaves with it still on his mind. Still considering his dilemma, Bill starts to lean more towards Sallie, not a scientist herself, but fun and entertaining to be around. As he does, his vision blurs and he hears someone calling out for their father and calling to him, and when his sight is clear again, he finds the futuristic, three-dimensional photo of Sallie on his desk, now one of a woman with her resemblance as well as his own. The woman is calling him, and when he answers, confused, she tells him she's reaching out to him across the millennium.

Through the picture, he can see her surrounded by other people in a circle who appear tense with concentration. It is through these people's mental abilities, as well as her own, that the women can speak to Bill. Believing he's dreaming, Bill asks her questions, and in responding to why he was chosen, she tells him that he is the last male to be born in her family before what she calls the blessed accident that saved the world from itself, and wants to show him what lies in his future.

He receives memories of marrying Sallie, of Sallie's love of partying and fashion, causing financial strain and less effort in his own work, work on sex determination. As others in Science City took him less seriously with his lack of success, Bill moved from the city with his wife, just wanting to be with her and their two daughters, the first of whom is Sue, sharing the same features as the woman from centuries in the future. More girls were being born than boys during that time, and this trend continued even after Bill's death, not, Moore states, that it mattered much really.

Women in public offices were proving very efficient, certainly they governed more peacefully than men, though apparently women are not as overall drawn to the sciences. In this future there has been a decrease in mechanization and technological advancement, a trend towards the rural and an outlaw on war.

Bill meanwhile loses himself in these visions in the future past his own existence, but he starts to grow concerned, watching the coming generations become less concerned with science and technology. He wonders then if this future is fixed, if he didn't marry Sallie, could he present what he has just seen?

Tearing up the letter to her, he rejoices in having the will to reject this future, but feels regret not getting to spend his life with Sallie or raise their daughters.

He turns to Marta's picture, and after a flash of blinding colors, opens his eyes again to see her eyes in the face of a boy that resembled himself, wearing a cap of steel. Calling the boy his son, Bill is met with no emotion from him, only a cold greeting. Seeing Bill confused though, the boy slightly softens, explaining that he is revered in this future, and is surprised to learn they've contacted him before his great work is finished.

He also tells Bill that he is John Williams Cory IV, and Bill feels pride when John tells him of his position in his world. Bill accepts their request to show him his future, still holding the possibility he is dreaming. He sees his marriage with Marta, with whom he could work as well as play, and who encouraged his success. She was the one who wanted him to reveal his discovery, the ability to offer parents the choice of having a girl or boy. Even though Bill was still hesitant, he eventually did make it public, and people clamored to use it.

However, around this time, the dogs that Bill had experimented upon during his research were acting strangely, obeying each command while not being officially trained. Whether this was high intelligence, obedience, or something else was uncertain. Even as others praised Bill for his invention, he remained uneasy. The Cory System's use became widespread, but Bill soon had his mind taken off his misgivings about it.

JM:

It's so interesting that this, again, like one of the other stories we talked about earlier, was published in 1939, because I kind of feel like maybe in a few years, some people would have thought a little bit more strongly that one version of this future society is much worse than the other one, just because of what had happened in the world at that time. But I mean, when you think about it objectively, yeah, you can see why they both seem equally bad in some ways, I guess, like, depending on your perspective. But it's like, it just seems like that was on the cusp of such a significant time where so many people in the world's viewpoints about those kind of things changed due to really terrible firsthand experience.

Gretchen:

Yeah.

Nate:

Yeah.

Gretchen:

Yeah, like you can imagine that the response would be pretty different if this was just like a year or two later.

Nate:

For sure, and I mean, the male lineage that we're into here is very clearly based on the Nazis. I mean, they're all doing the Roman salute. They're hyper organized like a military, but the, I guess it just didn't have the association with aggressive warfare and death camps and things like that. I mean, certainly the racism and antisemitism and all that stuff turned a lot of people off very, very early.

JM:

Yeah, it was already known, obviously.

Nate:

But, you know, it didn't have a body count in the millions like it would just a few years later.

JM:

Right, exactly. And I think that's what I mean. Like it's just not, it's one thing to have a unpleasant ideology when you're not murdering millions of people, right? Anyway, sorry. I just, there's so many things to say about this and I'm not, I'm like worried that I'm not going to remember everything.

Gretchen:

Yeah, putting a pin in several things to mention after the summary. But yes, Bill soon had his mind taken off of his misgivings about it by the birth of his own son, who had not been subjected to his discovery. Bill Jr. was stubborn, making his own life choices, unlike those children who had undergone the Cory System. They instead lacked initiative and ambition. The first generation of children came of age as a general George Hamilton controlled the US, a man who believed in a world in which individuals are subjugated under the state. To achieve this world, he waged wars and encouraged the boys to be soldiers for them.

After the general died, other leaders were still able to take up this cause, which expanded over time from creating a united world to a united solar system as space travel developed, conquering Mars, Venus, and Jupiter. In this united solar system, it is mandatory for people to place the needs of the leader class above their own individual needs, creating a society of little emotional expression and hiding of true selves from others. Bill can see that this future is the result of working towards the opposite goal of the previous one.

At his descendants, or Billy's eagerness, Bill starts to think of how great man's achievements are in that future, but the thoughts waver when Sue calls to him again from the other picture. He realizes, as both figures in the photos reach out to him, that neither can see the other. They cannot exist together, and Bill must choose between them.

But how can he choose?

Bill then questions how both of them, out of all their generations, managed to contact him at this exact point in his life, and he sees that both of them are opposite poles, possessing qualities that they get that together make up himself. He tries to talk to both Sue and Billy, but they grow concerned, though Sue understands more with her mental abilities. The leader in Billy's world tries to talk to Bill, and gets upset when the scientist implies that the future isn't fixed. Sue does as well, asking Bill how he can believe that she and the world she lives in aren't real.

Eventually, Bill turns from both photos, finding faults with both futures but finding no alternative choice but to accept one or the other, happiness and extinction, or unhappiness and immortality. The leader in the latter future draws Bill's attention once more, threatening to destroy Bill, even if it means, as Bill reminds him, the elimination of himself and the rest of his world.

Rolling out the weapon, he instructs Bill to call Marta and propose to her.

Before he does so, Bill has an idea.

He pushes a button beneath his desk, which calls his secretary, Miss Brown, into the room. With a last look at Sue and Billy, he asks Miss Brown if she will marry him, and she accepts.

JM:

Wow.

Gretchen:

What a twist.

JM:

The one he wasn't thinking of all along, or at least he wasn't telling us that he was thinking about her the whole time. Maybe he was.

Gretchen:

Yeah.

Nate:

I thought one direction he might go with this is the polyamorous "both" option.

Gretchen:

I thought he would swear off marriage.

Nate:

Yeah, that would be another way.

Gretchen:

The two futures vanish, and Bill knows that the future he has set, the course for will be better, more balanced. He knows he hasn't lost Sue and Billy since they are a part of himself.

Nate:

Yeah.

JM:

Well, I mean, Miss Brown is the only other woman mentioned in the story, and he pretty much has to do something like this. He has to break away from the loop of paths somehow, right? So I mean, he could act indecisive, but then the longer he does that, the more likely he's just going to get shot. His future descendant who's like, I don't care if it wipes out all of us. Your weakness is going to be the undoing of the universe. It'll be your fault.

Nate:

And I love how he knows it's all empty threats because he seems to understand how time travel paradoxes work.

Gretchen:

Yeah.

JM:

Yeah. But then, I don't know, I was wondering about this recently, and Gretchen and I, you were and I were talking about this once, but how much are time paradoxes really a human construct of existentialism? How does the universe really respond to that? We don't know. Because we've never been able to time travel, it seems impossible. So we don't know exactly how the universe will respond to time paradoxes, but it certainly seems like he is at the cusp of one right now.

Nate:

He certainly is, yeah.

JM:

Never so literal was the decision to be made. And it's really, I guess, startling how extreme this story is with that in a way, like just presenting that so vividly and so clearly, and yeah, it is kind of funny that in the end he chooses to marry this other woman that's just like, oh, wow, not yet more women here.

Gretchen:

He had her in his back pocket for that whole time.

JM:

Yeah.

Nate:

Three women at the office.

JM:

Yeah. Yeah, I mean, I guess things are different back then sometimes, but I just like, you never had any intimate relationship with somebody at all, and you're just asking them to marry you like this.

Nate:

Yeah. Hippies versus Nazis, and he chooses the third option.

Gretchen:

Yeah.

JM:

Yeah.

Gretchen:

Yeah, which by the way, I feel like, I don't know, I'm sure the other, you both may have maybe different opinions, but I definitely would have gone with the first future.

Nate:

Yeah, I would. I like the hippies.

Gretchen:

Yeah.

Nate:

I could hang out there. We're just reading literature all day, talking about nothing really in particular important, you know, it's a nice day out, just yeah, it's cool.

Gretchen:

Yeah. Explore your mind, you know.

JM:

I remember thinking the same thing, reading "Alas, All Thinking", right?

Nate:

Yeah, right.

JM:

Again, that was like the story where, again, I said, after 1939, would people think differently about this? And it's like, it's interesting because we're getting to that cusp now. And I think, like, I don't want to spend the entirety of Chrononauts talking about the American pulp magazine market, but I think it would be cool to look at, now look at stories from the late 40s and early 50s, not just in Astounding, but like especially Galaxy, which kind of has an opposite political viewpoint almost sometimes because of the editor.

Gretchen:

Yeah, I definitely would like to do a Galaxy episode or something.

Nate:

Yeah. And I think that would be another excuse to rope in some of this Italian stuff there because it was big in Italy and it was partially Italian co-founding and all that. But yeah, now we definitely have a lot of international stuff planned for our coming episodes and the American market does get a lot of recognition and, you know, attention because it really was the dominant market internationally during this time. Other stuff obviously existed, but this stuff was getting exported all over the world. And especially after the Second World War, it's really where we see the non-American science fiction scenes really like take off.

I think a lot of the histories we've looked at of various non-English science fiction materials after World War II is where a lot of them really, really start to get going. There's obviously early precursors for a lot of this stuff, which we've talked about on the podcast before, but as far as like an international movement where we're talking about fan involvement and conventions and...

JM:

Yeah, real science fiction community.

Nate:

Right, exactly. After World War II is really where it starts to get going.

JM:

Again, the first society described, supposedly female-oriented society does remind me of the Bates a little bit. But I'm kind of thinking like, so I don't know what I think about all that. I don't know what I think about all that, the fact the idea that like a society that's largely dominated by women, but she's not really leaning too heavily on that aspect of it, I think. Like, it's more like, it's the result of his union and he's just like a focal point in history. Like, there's not even any real necessary reason for him to be a focal point in history. He just is. And so if he marries this woman, things are going to go more this way, right? And it's like kind of suggested that I guess, yeah, like the military society is completely male-dominated and I guess the more pacifistic society is more woman-dominated. But it also could just be a result of the historical events that unfold around him. Like I don't really think she's hammering home the gender angle that much.

I don't know. What do you guys think?

Gretchen:

It's especially I think in that one segment that I kind of read a little from where she does say that about women being not disposed towards science and technology, which I have to wonder, you know, I'm sure that Moore maybe was a little tongue-in-cheek with that.

Nate:

She's obviously playing up on gender stereotypes in extreme ways in either direction. Her comments about women not wanting to be, "not scientists, not inventors, not mechanics or engineers or architects, there were men enough to keep these essentially masculine arts alive. That is as much of them as the new world needed."

JM:

It feels, yeah, it feels a little like she's satirizing maybe.

Nate:

I don't think she is necessarily, women while involved with all of those technical fields she mentioned were there. They definitely did not play a prominent role in the public perception of those industries. You look at any engineering or scientific banquet from 1939 and it is 100 percent without exception all men.

JM:

But how much of that was due to just expectations of the way people should be more than actual, the actual way that people are?

Nate:

Right.

JM:

I mean, we know that now that that's that's a big factor in it.

Nate:

It's not saying that women can't do these jobs, which they obviously can. It's that.

JM:

But they didn't. They did not at that time.

Gretchen:

It was just societal, like structural issues rather than individual.

Nate:

It actually is. There was really no path for the average woman to be in those fields at that time. There was obviously exceptions.

JM:

It was society in the way it was set up. It wasn't the nature of men and women. It was the way things have been set up that prevented women from gaining access at the ones who thought, hey, it would be really cool to be an explorer, which is what Willy Ley said in his high school assignment, and he was poo pooed by his teachers. But like if he was a woman, he would have probably been poo pooed a lot more.

Nate:

Right.

JM:

If he said, hey, I want to be an explorer and like, I don't know. Yeah.

Nate:

Yeah. The women that had the opportunity to make advancements or really any mark at all, they all had the commonality of being upper class and well connected in some way.

JM:

Well, yeah. And they had more opportunities because of that.

Nate:

Right.

JM:

I mean, yes, they were held back in other ways, but they had perhaps indulged these things that some of the stupider men in their lives were probably like, oh, it's just a foolish, foolish canard. You being interested in your microscopes. Yeah. I don't know.

So I mean, again, I think that, I mean, Moore herself, she definitely seemed to, I don't know, like to me, it definitely seems like she believes that artistry and things like that are very important and that women are very good at that and she herself is very good at that. I don't know if she herself couldn't imagine being in a technical field and maybe that creates a certain alieness to it where it's like, it seems very masculine or something like that.

Gretchen:

Well, I think it's also, J.M., you were saying at the beginning, like, when we were talking about how much emotion that she puts into her work and how it's different from like something that was written usually by a man.

JM:

Everybody's always feeling everything and very strongly. Yeah.

Gretchen:

Yeah. And you have to wonder, was her own writing style influenced by this idea that she had and maybe she felt that that was how she should write as a woman or maybe she thought that the reason she wrote differently from her peers was because she was a woman.

JM:

But that, I mean, and then we come around full circle because now that we phrase it like that, I can't help but see that as a good thing, like, yeah, that's cool actually that she did that, right? But yeah, I mean, I don't know. She probably didn't know any women scientists, I'm imagining.

Nate:

No, there weren't many that were high profile at the time at all. In fact, I talked about the ENIAC being one of the first electronic digital computers in the world. Well, the people who programmed the ENIAC were all women and there's amazing photos of the women who worked with the ENIAC that are circulating now. But at the time in the 1940s, all the promotional photos were with the men and any women who appeared that were with the machine that day when they were taking those promotional photos that were going to be used in advertisements and stuff were airbrushed out of the photos.

JM:

What?

Nate:

Yeah.

JM:

Oh.

Nate:

Yeah. So, I mean, while women have been recognized for their achievements in the sciences and the engineering world that were doing things in the 1930s and before, they're recognized today, they were not at all recognized at the time. Nobody knew who Ada Lovelace was in 1939. And when they talk about Babbage in the article we read in this issue, Ada Lovelace has not mentioned in that. And she is arguably the most important part of that story as far as it applies to how computers function today and how forward thinking that was. But women were just written out of the narrative at that point in time. So while women did make contributions at that time through a number of obstacles and hurdles, when they did make those achievements, they were more often than not written out of the narrative.

Gretchen:

Yeah. I mean, you know, when talking about a lot of women in history, it's kind of more excavating history rather than taking it as it is.

Nate:

Right, exactly. Yeah. Yeah.

JM:

In all fairness, she does describe, oh no, what's the name of the more science-oriented woman that he might possibly marry.

Gretchen:

Oh, Marta?

JM:

Yeah. She describes her with some affection too, and that she's like a really cool person and it's really cool that she's into all this stuff. Like, she obviously likes that idea, so it's kind of a shame that it leads to what it apparently leads to. But at the same time, yeah, not a big deal is made of the fact that she is a female scientist either. Like, you know, it's kind of like, yeah, that's what she's really into and she's really serious about it and she's pushing him to do better at his work, and I don't know, and a part of me also kind of thinks, well, she's the more intellectual one, whereas Mary, she's more like obsessed with more frivolous things or things that could be considered frivolous, I guess. And it's that frivolity that is in the end, like, kind of the undoing of the human race on that end of the spectrum.

Again, like, I feel like if you're going to go down, you might as well go down in a period when people are enjoying themselves and feeling good rather than, like, burning in radioactive torment or something like that.

Gretchen:

Well, I think what's interesting about it is, I think this is the same with "Alas, all Thinking", there's this idea where human beings are not able to face the fact that they are not going to be around forever. And because he says either happiness and extinction or unhappiness and immortality, but what is the point of immortality? It's based on, like, colonization and something similar to what we're seeing in "When the Half-Gods Go", like, we're just completely overriding these other people that have as much right to prosper as we do.

JM:

And I'm willing to bet you that for most of the Astounding readership, the idea that humanity could just wither away and die and not, like, ever get into space and not do anything to spread the idea of human consciousness around the universe would be really depressing.

Nate:

Probably, yeah.

Gretchen:

Yeah.

Nate:

I mean, I'm sure the average age of the reader and the subscriber was closer to Isaac Asimov, you know, being, like, 18, 19 or so than people in their 30s and 40s.

Gretchen:

People who may not even think, I'm not going to die, you know, that sort of mentality.

JM:

Yeah, I was going to say, Gretchen, you're the right age to be, like, on fire with this stuff. I don't know, to me, maybe. Now that I've read a couple of these stories, including the Harry Bates that really made me think about this stuff, like, a lot, and this one, and, you know, I'm kind of thinking, like, yeah, but is the idea of winding down thousands of years from now peacefully and, like, contemplatively and intellectually, is it really that bad? I don't know. It doesn't seem that terrible. I mean, it's in the future, but...

Nate:

I don't think so. I mean...

Gretchen:

Yeah, I think it's a great way to go, personally. And I think, you know, like we were saying, with "Alas, All Thinking", there's the scene, you know, when he's about to kill one of the humans, and it's like, you know, he's having these thoughts that are honestly very poignant and meaningful, but it's like, oh, well, you know, it's not what I think is good, so I'm going to murder this man.

JM:

I mean, I can see how you'd be like, there's a little less brio to life these days, but I don't know. Yeah.

Gretchen:

I mean, it's not like we're going out exploring or anything, but does that have to happen if we're content?

Nate:

Yeah. I don't know. As someone who's spent several hundred hours poring over trying to make sense of Russian and Ukrainian sentences from the 1920s, I don't mind having my head buried in the clouds and in the academic works of the arts. I don't think that being a space Nazi is any good productive use of my time.

Gretchen:

So yeah, yeah, I would prefer not to colonize other planets.

JM:

Makes sense. Yeah. I mean, I don't know. I think we should still try, but I guess balance and having equal time for every side really seems important, but how do you achieve that and how do you reach that balance? I guess "Greater than Gods" doesn't really provide an answer to that. We don't really know what will happen when he marries Miss Brown. She might be more solid and dependable, but we don't really know that. So I don't know. I mean, I guess, again, I really think it's cool how she is able to make both seem like they have their attractive points, even though, yeah, the military society probably is based on Nazism.

Nate:

The illustrations definitely make it very clear it's based on Nazism.

JM:

But the son is still is a very admirable figure. He's still described with much love and affection. Maybe that's personal. It's not ideological, but it's like showing that, yeah, like, unfortunately, people are hiding themselves in that future and they're hiding who they truly are, and that seems to me a lot more sad than just like laying back and having a good time like, I don't know.

Gretchen:

Yeah. Hippies chilling out and it's like that versus 1984 scenario where no one can express their true feelings.

Nate:

Yeah. Yeah.

Gretchen:

But that is the point that I do like is that no individual is at all villainized or anything in this story really. Even like when we were talking about, yeah, Sallie, she does like the party. She likes to have fun. She may be a little hard with finances, but you also see that she is someone that brings a lot of joy to Bill and like he doesn't really mind it at all. I think that's really nice because it could have gone like, here's this woman who's like leeching off of Bill, you know? And it felt like that at first, but then you see like, no.

JM:

It's not really like that. Yeah.

Gretchen:

Yeah. He's like, yeah, that's cool. I'm going to go party with you, you know?

Nate:

Yeah. And he legitimately loves his, I guess, hypothetical children and feels his deep emotional connection with them even though he feels that both of their futures are not good. Yeah. It's a really nice touch because he could portray his descendants as like awful people, but they're not. They're just products of their time and the environment that they were brought up in.

JM:

Right. As is anybody, as is the soldiers that so many will meet, you know, and have to think about as the enemy. Yeah. I don't know. It is definitely really powerful and like it's kind of crazy how, again, this is a story of people talking to each other very intensely, but it manages to be powerful and emotional.

I think Moore is definitely good at that. I remember reading this first and this is actually not the first time I read this story. I read this. Oh, I don't know. Probably close to 15 years ago now in the best of C. L. Moore collection. And this one kind of did strike me at the time as being very like, yeah, it's everybody keyed up to maximum pitch and being really emotional and like trying to argue their case and, and this guy being caught in the middle and having to choose between two possible futures and so many of her stories have this climax of intensity to them. I think it's actually really cool. You know, it's something that she just does and I don't know. I mean, "Vintage Season" arguably has a few of them, but like obviously at the end there where there's the, the big apocalypse moment and that it's what's his name sitting there alone with the composer and being told what's happening when he's dying of the plague and it's just like, yeah. 

Nate:

Yeah, I think what I like about her, both in this and "Vintage Season" is that her pro style is just really inviting and good to read, even though like almost nothing happens in the course of the story. I mean, like we described the plot summary and, you know, what happens here, but it's much longer than it could be of a basic idea of, you know, here's your choice between two future paths. You know, what do you choose? She just has a very good way about plotting and pacing and her word choice and the whole mood and atmosphere.

JM:

And there's a real intensity to her writing. I think that not everybody has like, it's just like everything is charged up in a Moore story and like, you gotta figure like her Weird Tales stories, the Northwest Smith stories and the Jirel Of Joiry stories, like Jirel stories are a little different, but the Northwest Smith stories are basically all about space vampires and they're basically about how the bed feel when they're in proximity to these various space vampires of different kinds, like some of them are more literal than others. Sometimes it's a very like existential, weird thing. That's hard to explain, but that's basically being around them will enslave you to that. And it's, I think we've all read "Shambleau" now, right?

Nate:

No, no, I haven't.

JM:

Okay. So yeah, like that's, it's kind of, it's, it's interesting too, because I mean, I was gonna save this for actually commenting on "Shambleau", which I think maybe we'd like to do sometime.

Nate:

We have a penciled in somewhere. I mean, you know, who knows when we're going to get around to covering it. We have a lot of things.

JM:

Moore wrote all these, like she wrote these point of view characters like Northwest Smith, kind of like that space Western atmosphere, and he's encountering all these, these mostly vampiric kind of often feminine creatures from various worlds like Venus and Mars. And she, I guess you could say like this kind of story was sort of popular. I mean, there were a lot of stories about similar kind of themes, right? And normally you would think, yeah, we identify with the male protagonist and we identify with the person who's having to overcome these obstacles and these perhaps feminine evils. MoOre though, specifically said, and I can't remember where she was asked about this, but she was talking about "Shambleau" because it was her first published story. And even though I don't know that it's necessarily a best story, I mean, I love "Vintage Season". I think it's a masterpiece. To me, that's the best thing I've read from her, but I can't say for sure. I mean, again, like we were saying a few episodes back, I don't really feel the need to necessarily say that something is the best is just maybe my favorite.

But she said that she identified with Shambleau and she wanted to be more like her. And she thought herself as the space vampire. That is her perspective, I think, even though it seems like a very simple statement where she's just commenting on one of her stories, like it's her first published story, whatever. I think that that does say something that she did kind of identify with the monster, so-called and she wants to be that person. She thinks of herself as the mysterious woman with the mysterious snake hair and possibly very seductive, but also very powerful and with a deep intellectual bent. So I don't know. I mean, it's it's just interesting to think about the writers of these kind of stories are really into adventure and they really write adventure stories and often you must imagine that, yes, they sit there and think of themselves as an element in one of the stories that they write. So who do they think of them like? Are they Conan or are they one of the villains? I don't know, it's just interesting to read that. Or she was saying like, yeah, Shambleau is the the person that I want to be like, even though the Shambleau is the mysterious other in the story that seems kind of threatening an alien.

Gretchen:

Yeah. And thinking of other writers compared to her and thinking of what was mentioned about how engaging her prose is, like you said, Nate, thinking of this compared to like the other two that I summarized, "The Moth" and "Lightship, Ho!". And it's like, yes, these are action oriented stories. They have more plot wise, more things going on than Moore's story where like you can kind of just say it's a man who's sitting at his desk and he feels a lot of things.

Nate:

Yeah.

Gretchen:

He sees things and he feels things, but that's the one that's more engaging and more interesting to read.

JM:

Yeah.

Nate:

And I bet it could be branded as one of those "thought variant" stories because, you know, it literally is a thought variant. But yeah, it was such a refreshing break to read this story. I like the Amelia Reynolds Long a lot, but the issue really does sag in the middle.

JM:

And yeah, I can see that. I mean, I pretty much liked everything in here, but the Bond, but I don't know. Yeah. I see what you mean. Yeah. I mean, the Rocklynne is not awesome.

Gretchen:

I find the Bond to be kind of charming. And I definitely, I don't absolutely hate "The Moth". I think that there's obviously a lot of flaws with it. You know, it's the weakest story here.

Nate:

Yeah. I wouldn't say I hate it. I definitely strongly dislike it. I think it might go in my bottom 10 of any Chrononauts story we've done.

JM:

Okay, yeah. 

Nate:

But the Moore was great and definitely a great closer to the issue.

Nate:

Yeah. I mean, she's definitely two for two on Chrononauts so far.

Gretchen:

Yeah.

JM:

And I would like to come back to her, not because we're a podcast that sticks to doing things according to some kind of order or anything like that, but because we like to cover stories that we like, and we're going to do some more host choice and we're going to do some host choice specifically dedicated towards short stories where we each pick a couple. So there's a lot of cool stuff like that looking forward and we might be able to get in all kinds of cool stories. So I don't know, at least a few more Moore stories are certainly a good possibility.

Nate:

Yeah. We definitely have some penciled in and I just checked our list and that one might be penciled in sooner rather than later when we do more sort and planet type stuff. So stick around for that.

JM:

Yeah. There's some annoying I don't know, it seems like a bunch of ads were placed at the end of this story.

Nate:

Yeah. She got hit the hardest with all the authors for the ads. 

Gretchen:

Which is, talking about how engaging the story is, like what a shame, you know?

Nate:

Yeah. I mean, it is the back of the issue and the back of the issue is typically where you stick the ads, but there are a couple of pages where it's just like literally one column of the story and then like four columns of advertisements.

JM:

Yeah. And, you know, they were doing pretty well before then, like it didn't seem like the ads were that pervasive and I was like, tolerantly amused by them and then they just all kind of showed up there with, I don't know, yeah, I don't really like that.

Gretchen:

They realize you're almost finished with the issue. So we got to throw as many of these in as possible.

JM:

Yeah. Yeah, that was weird. But I mean, I guess, again, that wasn't really anybody's fault. Like, I mean, this could have been the first story as easily as "Black Destroyer", but I'm not unhappy that it was the last story, you know what I mean? Like if I was reading the magazine cover to cover, I would want a really awesome story at the end.

Nate:

Yeah, totally. Yeah.

Gretchen:

And I think it has the right like mood to end on.

Nate:

Yeah. Yeah. It makes you think more than "Black Destroyer" does. I mean, I guess we were all kind of confused by like the physics of the ending of "Black Destroyer", but this makes you think in a different way than that. Yeah.

JM:

So wait, Nate, what was that other thing you were thinking of? How did you think that it was going to end?

Nate:

Oh, that he was going to marry him both and do like a polyamory type deal.

JM:

Oh, yeah. Okay. I see what you mean. I guess so. That would have been, that would have been a lot more modern, I suppose, but yeah. 

Nate:

I don't know.

Gretchen:

Maybe in Sue's future, you know, with all the hippies, that would have been it.

JM:

Yeah. Well, I mean, not that it wasn't a thing. Like one of our authors that we've talked about before, H. G. Walls, was very into that. So.

Nate:

And Charles Hinton.

Gretchen:

Oh, yeah. Yeah. Yeah.

JM:

But he was more, he was an asshole.

Nate:

Yeah.

Gretchen:

Yeah. I don't want to think too much about Hinton.

Nate:

Yeah.

JM:

And Robert Heinlein was kind of into that too, I guess, but we haven't talked about him yet. So he has a way of annoying people. So I don't know how it's going to go talking about him, but we'll get there someday.

Nate:

Yeah. Well, he appears in the August 1939 issue of Astounding. So if you're checking out the collection of magazines that they have on archive.org, you could just go to the next issue. He's in the very next issue.

Gretchen:

Is that his debut?

Nate:

Yeah. His debut anywhere.

JM:

Yeah.

Nate:

So yeah. It's a pretty amazing time for these big science fiction authors, this very specific period in 1939 of Asimov and Heinlein's debut in Astounding being pretty much back to back.

JM:

Yeah.

Nate:

Van Vogt right there.

JM:

Vаn Vogt's there. And Clarke was still a few years away, but he would eventually be in Astounding as well.

Nate:

He would. Yes.

JM:

I don't think that was his first publication, but it's pretty early on for him.

Nate:

It was his first professional publication, but he had a couple earlier fanzine publications.

JM:

Yeah. Yeah. So there's like 1940, the late later 40s sometime.

Nate:

Yeah. Early mid 40s. Yeah. Yeah.

(music: elastic chance)

Astounding July 1939 story ranking, general issue discussion

JM:

Do you want to just for fun write these stories in the magazine?

Nate:

Worst for me, definitely the Rocklynne did not like this one at all. Yeah. Yeah. Worst for me, it's, I think the worst story we've covered in a while. Not the worst story we've covered on the podcast is nowhere near as bad as "New Steam Man", but did not like it.

Second worst is the Bond. You know, it was not a good story, but to me it was at least like fun in some ways.

I would say after that is the Schachner. Kind of middle of the road, didn't dislike it, but it didn't really have anything aside from that really cool vacuum scene to really stand out.

Then I would say "Black Destroyer", overall I liked it, but it did have some flaws that I wasn't too wild about.

Then I would say "When the Half Gods Go," it has a lot going for it. Nothing I really disliked about it. Really cool atmosphere.

Then number two is "Trends". Really awesome debut from Asimov has some really cool themes that it goes over and he's just an engaging writer and this one didn't have any of the issues that I had found...

JM:

No, and I think in a lot of his short stories, you'll be okay, it's not... The ones that don't end up in fixed up novels. Generally, there's nothing to be upset about, in my opinion anyway.

Nate:

And I wasn't here.

And number one is this one, "Greater Than Gods". I thought this one was great. I really like Moore's prose style. Yeah. That's my rankings for this issue.

Gretchen:

Because I also just wrote mine down quickly. I kind of have, I mean, I think I have the same order.

Well, I will say, yeah, "The Moth", least favorite, just quite a few problems with it. Like I said, I didn't, I don't hate it. I think we've definitely read some worse works on this podcast, but it's not a good story.

Nate:

And you honestly picked the right time to join the podcast, because when we did that "New Steam Man", that was like awful, and I would have hated that would have been the first work you covered on the podcast.

JM:

I'm glad that didn't happen. I'm glad that didn't happen. But I'm also like "New Steam Man" is just so interesting because it's so old, right?

Nate:

Yeah.

JM:

It's just like, oh, wow.

Gretchen:

I'm glad I got to start with an Edgar Allan Poe work, you know, that was nice.

Nate:

Yeah.

Gretchen:

But yeah. And then "Lightship, Ho!", which I did find endearing, I find parts of it enjoyable. I think that in a better story, the dynamic between the two main characters would be fun to read.

Then, yeah, "City of Cosmic Rays", it's, I still don't mind it as a standalone, like I said, I think it's kind of fun to picture as a standalone, but it definitely, I'm sure, would be interesting to read as part of the series.

And then, yeah, "Black Destroyer", which I did enjoy. I think I did enjoy it more than you did, Nate. I kind of did like the crew a little bit more, I think. But yeah, the ending, like you were saying, is a little strange and there were some other issues with it.

Then I think "Where the Half Gods Go" and "Trends", I kind of want to tie them. I think they both have really interesting attributes together. I think they both kind of go together as we kind of were mentioning. Both about religion and both kind of thinking about similar topics, I think, with that, at least.

But yeah, "Greater Than Gods" is the best one. And I'm not surprised I kind of was thinking it would be just because I love Moore. So I was very happy that I got to summarize that one and lead on it.

JM:

Yeah. My turn. Well, at the bottom is Nelson S. Bond, "Lightship". The humor was not that funny for me, so I don't know, it didn't really work that well. There were some things about it that were charming, though. Honestly can't say that I really despise anything in the issue, so I don't know. It was definitely my least favorite, though.

Then was Rocklynne with "The Moth". I like the style, the hard boiled stuff, the kind of weird future fashion descriptions were cool. The industrial sabotage angle started out pretty well, and I was almost impressed because I thought we were going to get a really cool woman, scientist, engineer type person, and we didn't get that. But for a while it was a possibility.

Gretchen:

Well, you know, women aren't disposed towards science, so.

JM:

Yeah. I don't know. The humor was slightly on point, I thought, and the situation Felix's dilemma at the end was interesting, so I don't know, it wasn't that bad.

Then I got "City of the Cosmic Rays" because, yeah, it just felt like being dropped in the middle of something. There were seem to be some cool ideas, but they were not fleshed out enough for me, and I don't know, I read the origin story, and I kind of liked that one a lot better, even though there was tons of weird, racial stuff in it, and lots of, like, this guy is a Greek god that you would really want to have sex with, kind of stuff in it, but I don't know, yeah, the "Cosmic Rays" was just sort of being thrown into the middle of this ongoing thing, even though it wasn't a serial, so I don't know. I liked it, though. The style was kind of cool. It was really weird, which made it more enjoyable, I think.

Then I got "Trends". I like it a lot. I like Asimov. I think his short stories are some of the most influential things in my life, not just in terms of things that I've read, but, like, things that I thought about when I was a kid and still think about now, and, like, just, yeah. So I like the story a lot. I just, I don't know if it doesn't stand up to some of his best, but at the same time, yeah. When he's 19, he's very passionate about this. It's a problem story, so it's got a lot of the hallmarks of a really good Asimov story, I think, and the dialogues are cool. I mean, you may say that his characters are not so deep, and that is a general criticism that people love against him, but I don't really think that's fair. I think his dialogues of characters is really fun, and he manages to just convey a lot about them by the things that they say. He doesn't have to tell you a ton of background, and this and that, and the other thing, and I don't know. I will always stand up for Asimov. I like his ability to convey a lot of serious scientific concepts in a way that a lot of people will be able to understand and relate to. I think it's a gift, so anyway, "Trends" is a really good story.

Then I got "Black Destroyer", I guess I'm kind of hesitating between number three and number two. I don't know, it's hard to pick the top ones because I think in a lot of ways, I cannot help but feel that the writers I really like, are the ones that are going to be on the top, and because I've experienced Moore and Asimov and Van Vogt before, I'm going to place them highly. But in any case, "Black Destroyer" to me is a cool story that's got flaws, but the flaws are not to me that much of a deterrent. I personally am not too bothered by them in this, I don't know, in Van Vogt. I think it's okay. I'm all right with it if that's the wrong or hypocritical or something, so be it, but I don't know. It doesn't bother me. I enjoy this a lot. But I don't know that it's his best, I actually read a story recently that was in the "Science Fiction Omnibus", edited by Brian Aldiss, and as mentioned in our Van Vogt episode, Aldiss seemed to enjoy Van Vogt, even though he is one of those people who kind of likes to disparage the science fiction writers of the pulp era, especially who have little literary merit. But he seems to have time for Alfred, and I get it. It just got a lot of zeal and a lot of wonder in his sensibility. He writes like a dreamer, and I think that's cool.

So number two, yeah, it's "When the Half Gods Go", Amelia Reynolds Long, is weird because so little seems to be known about her, and I can't really unearth too much, and I'm kind of curious about the poetry, but like, I don't know, she seems unjustly forgotten perhaps and like, it's weird because yeah, I wouldn't say any of the stories I read by her were like, maybe top level in terms of writing, but at the same time, they always leave an impression. And this story really did, and I kept thinking about it for a long time, and at the end of the day, that has to be one of my criteria, one of the big ones is, when I finish the story, how am I going to think about it a lot afterwards? And this is one where I did, a lot of it was me trying to puzzle out what she meant. And she's enigmatic and doesn't entirely want to reveal that to you, which I respect a lot, so that's why.

And then, yeah, "Greater than Gods", again, it probably has mostly to do with the fact that I value, I think we all value good prose and style and Moore has that. But also, you know, because we've been talking about this story for a while already, and you can see it's sort of unearthed some feelings and some thoughts and made us want to talk about our, the way we all think about things and our ideologies and how we might perceive the world and how people perceive the world in 1939, who are reading the American science fiction pulp magazines, and how that might be different from now, and stuff to do with genders and what's expected of the various genders in society, and I don't know, it's just there's there's a lot packed into it. It's maybe not the best Moore story, but I'm still going to say it's the number one story in Astounding July 1939. That's my opinion.

So I think we're all in unison about that, which is cool.

Nate:

Yeah.

Gretchen:

Yeah.

JM:

Next time on Chrononauts. Last month or actually, I guess a couple months ago now, we talked about fandom, and we talked about the early fandom magazines of the 1930s, but we also covered a Star Trek story. And now we're going to talk about how science fiction, televisual media basically spawned the growth of fandom. But not only that, professional books published under the byline of these properties, licensed properties, licensed to publishing companies in Britain and the United States specifically. And we're going to talk about two things that we like very much, Doctor Who and Star Trek. And so we're going to be talking about one Doctor Who novel and one Star Trek novel.

So the Doctor Who novel I have chosen is "The Eye of Heaven" by Jim Mortimer. And it is a novel featuring the fourth incarnation of the Doctor and his companion Leela. And it was published in 1998. The main reason that I picked "The Eye of Heaven" was that it is not connected to any of the arcs of stories that feature the Doctors that were current when the novels were written. So in a sense, that's a weakness for some of the books because the ones that dwell on past incarnations could tend to descend into a kind of rote, this is what we expect from a Doctor Who story sort of thing. And I guess you could say that about the Star Trek novels too. I mean, of the TOS novels written in the 1990s, like the series is long over. So how much could they possibly do? But the thing is, some writers found ways around this. And I think it was really important to choose something that didn't tie into anything else. And I really liked this book, so that was why I chose it pretty much.

And Gretchen, you have picked us a Star Trek novel. What is that?

Gretchen:

Yes, I have picked the Star Trek TOS novel, "The Wounded Sky" by Diane Duane. I chose that because Diane Duane is quite a prolific writer, especially with Star Trek, but also just in general seems to be connected with a lot of fandoms, including other sci-fi fandoms that hopefully we'll get to talk about it. Blake 7, she seems to have experience with as well. It was her first novel for the TOS series of novels, so that was the one I decided to go with.

JM:

Yeah, so I hope you are looking forward to that. I know I am. It should be really fun to talk about those things. I know we're going to use the time to not just talk about those books specifically, but our relationship with the respective, I guess, fandoms and media, Doctor Who and Star Trek specifically, and how we feel about those things. We've certainly hinted at a lot of those before on the podcast. Everybody who's been listening for a while probably knows that we like those things, especially Doctor Who, because we always seem to sneak in references.

Nate:

Yeah, definitely. We initially planned this as part of the episode we did last time on fanzines and fan fiction, but we quickly realized that it became way too big and too much to do into one episode. So we kind of decided to split it up in the staggering order of going between the Astounding episodes because we think that all four of these episodes really tie together into one cohesive whole that kind of forms the basis for American science fiction.

JM:

Yeah, and yeah, after that, we're probably going to do some host choice stuff, so it'll be cool.

Nate:

Yeah.

JM:

Everybody who's listening in, feel free to like and subscribe and do all that cool stuff that you're supposed to do. If you're listening on the YouTube channel, definitely subscribe. Write us a comment. We've been getting a few nice comments lately, which is cool.

Nate:

Yeah. Thank you for everybody for listening. We definitely got a lot of views recently on YouTube. So if you've made it this far, we're happy to have you here.

JM:

We'd love to talk. So if you want to leave us mail at chrononautspodcast@gmail.com or YouTube comments or comments on the various podcast platforms, please do that. We would love to hear from you. 

closing sketch

JM:

And so, now, it's late, and while we sincerely hope you've enjoyed your time here with us on Chrononauts...

(STRANGE DISTORTED SOUND RESOLVES, AFTER A FEW SECONDS, INTO AGGRESSIVE POUNDING ON THE DOOR OF...

Gretchen:

What happened?

Nate:

The external environment has developed a LOW-LEVEL IMPINGEMENT event which is interfering with our cross-temporal psychometric channeling! We can no longer interact with the world of the future!

Sheriff:

All right! Allright! Open up in there! Kids up to no good, I tell ya, they oughta be put to work until they beg for mama!

Sheriff:

What's the game here anyway. (LOOKS AROUND ROOM DISAPPROVINGLY) You three JOKERS don't own this joint now do ya?

Gretchen:

Well, no, but...

Nate:

We're holding it -- guarding it, for the owners, you know. here (OFFERS GLASSES) Would you care for some psycho-temporal resonators? Put them on and see the world better than ever BEFORE! YOURS FOR A SONG! 

Gretchen:

Some bourbon? Goes down real smooth!  This stuff is famous down in Kentucky! ... ... No?

Sheriff:

All right, you best not act like a buncha wiseguys, or I'll have to book ya. Give you some time in the tank with the drunks! See long you last. Don't let me see you round here again, or else! There's definitely gonna have to be some cleanup. Woudl'nt want anyone *respectable* to see the joint looking like this! Say, this one looks kinda pretty! Nice silky blonde hair, great big ... hey wait a minute! Tentacles? AAAARGH!

Music:
Hirsch, Louis A. - "Sweet Kentucky Lady" (1914) https://www.loc.gov/resource/music.musihas-100006686/?sp=1&st=image
Dodge, Mr. & Mrs John Wilson - "Moon, Moon, Moon" (1910) https://www.loc.gov/resource/musm1508.10020387.0/

Saturday, February 10, 2024

Episode 40.6 transcription - Amelia Reynolds Long - "When the Half Gods Go" (1939)

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(music: pulsing delayed synth)

Amelia Reynolds Long biography, non-spoiler summary

JM:

Hello, and welcome to Chrononauts. This is our episode on the July 1939 issue of Astounding, and we have recorded several pieces of this already, so if you want to listen to those, you should go and start with the first one where we talked about "Black Destroyer" from AE Van Vogt. We've also covered stories by Isaac Asimov, Nat Schachner, Nelson Bond, and Ross Rocklynne, as well as some interesting supplemental material like the nonfiction articles and letter columns in the magazine.

Now though, I want to talk about Amelia Reynolds Long. She is one of our less known writers today, and she was born in Columbia, Pennsylvania in 1904, near Harrisburg, where she seems to have spent all of her life. She got her master's in English and education and graduated from the University of Pennsylvania in 1932. She went through a few different writing phases, starting with her focus on weird fiction and the Weird Tales market, including at least one occult detective story, "The Thought Monster", and what is apparently a pretty good vampire tale in "The Undead". I've read "The Thought Monster", and it can be found in "The Fighters of Fear" anthology, which is a book that recently came out featuring various occult detectives, and I'm mentioning this because Amelia Reynolds Long just doesn't seem to have been reprinted very much. And I do think that is a shame. I think she's actually pretty good, and it would kind of be cool at this point if somebody put out a collection of her science fiction and Weird Tales work.

Nate:

Yeah, I agree.

JM:

I think that's definitely needed because such a thing doesn't exist. I would say that maybe the stories I read, I don't know, I think that "The Thought Monster" being more of a Weird Tales thing, like it could be that that's more appropriate for her, but I'm not sure. And that's what we're going to sort of try to figure out when we talk about this story.

Nate:

You do get the sense from the story that she does like the weird. Yeah, there have been a couple other authors like that. We did Sophie Wenzel Ellis when we covered our last episode on Astounding, and she was kind of the same way where she was more comfortable in the weird fiction stuff. And those elements of weird fiction do come out in her story in that episode, and just like Amelia Reynolds Long's has definitely come out in the story.

JM:

For sure, yeah. I do have an online friend who collects Weird Tales magazines. And when I mentioned that we were doing Amelia Reynolds long story, she said she hadn't read any, but she found two in the issues that she had. She read them and she said one of them was a little predictable and not that great, but that she was the one that mentioned "The Undead" and said that she really enjoyed it and it was a really good original atmospheric take on a vampire tale. So I'm kind of curious to read that one. 

Nate:

Yeah, definitely.

JM:

"The Thought Monster" was the basis for the 1957 British film "Fiend Without a Face", which I really like. I really like that film. It's kind of one of my go to fifties weird sci fi monster movies, along with "The Crawling Eye". I think those two movies are pretty similar in some ways. And although I may have a slight preference for "The Crawling Eye", "The Fiend Without" a Face is certainly a memorable movie and apparently made quite an impression on people at the time. It's mentioned specifically in Stephen King's book, "It" as the film the kids are watching in the cinema. 

Nate:

Right.

JM:

So yeah, pretty cool. I've also read the story "Reverse Phylogeny", which can be found in the book "Sisters of Tomorrow", which is a book that we've referred to a few times on the podcast, or at least once or twice. You can find a little bit of biographical information about her in that book as well. In the later thirties, she turned to more science fiction motifs, though, like we said, I think there was always the impression of the weird still present in these works. She said she got the weird impetus from her love of Shakespeare's "Macbeth" as well as Edgar Allan Poe. Some of her colorfully titled stories from this period include "A Leak in the Fountain of Youth", "Flapping Wings of Death", and "A Scandal in the Fourth Dimension".

In the late thirties, she was already getting into doing mystery fiction. She co-wrote a book with William Crawford, who is also an occasional published science fiction writer. And it was titled "Behind the Evidence", and it was based on a real life incident that happened in 1932, which was the kidnapping of Charles Lindbergh's son in Hopwell, New Jersey. Apparently pretty harrowing case. I'd never heard of this before, but it seems like somebody put this family basically through hell for almost an entire year, and it turned out that the kid was dead, like almost from the beginning. And he was trying to extort, like, hundreds of thousands of dollars from this family, right?

Nate:

Well, yeah, the Lindberghs were the famous aviators.

Gretchen:

Yeah.

JM:

Yeah. And Charles Lindbergh was an aviator, right? Yeah, so.

Gretchen:

I remember watching a special on TV a couple of years ago about that.

Nate:

Yeah, pretty wild story.

JM:

Oh, really? Yeah. Yeah, okay. I guess it looks to me quite a tale. I don't think I'd come across it before. I guess I'm not really somebody who follows real crime stories that much. It seemed to like the fictional ones better, but I guess for a while there, a few years ago, I was listening to a lot of like true crime podcasts and stuff, and I kind of stopped. I don't know. From what I was reading about it in the FBI's write up about it was that I could picture it on an episode of like Case Files or something like that.

Nate:

Well, I think it was actually adapted for those TV documentary several times. There's certainly a lot of popular culture references to it.

Gretchen:

I think the one that I saw was this show called like Mysteries at the Museum, which does some stuff like that.

JM:

Yeah, interesting. Well, apparently only 75 copies of Amelia and Crawford's book was printed. And the book was mostly given to friends. And then I think in 1936 was when Hauptmann or whatever his name was was given the electric chair. And I think, I don't know, maybe just the timing was not right. I don't know what she wrote in the book necessarily, but it's kind of a theme here. Unfortunately, I can't find much of her stuff. And that's, that's unfortunate. 

But in the 40s, though, she published a ton of mystery novels. There were many of them and she was turning out these things, four or five a year. And I can find very little about these nowadays though, oddly, there seem to be a number of Spanish translations available. And most of these were published by a company called Phoenix Press. And some were published under other names like Patrick Laing and Adrian Reynolds. And given some of her comments that I'll get to in a minute, I think that's kind of weird, but I don't know.

But of her loss of interest in writing SF, she said, "I stopped writing science fiction and the weird story right around that time," meaning, I guess 1940 roughly or thereabouts, "because science fiction had hit the comic strips. And I felt that it was sort of degrading to compete with a comic strip."

Her mysteries were not in the American hard boiled style, which she was not a fan of, but more in the Agatha Christie tradition. And you can kind of tell that from the titles. There's actually a book called "Murder Most Foul", which I don't know who first said that. 

Nate:

Shakespeare.

JM:

It's kind of like the cliche saying to describe like Victorian Holmesish murder mysteries. We must solve a case. It is murder most foul. And they have titles like that. "It is Death, My Darling". And I don't know. Some of them sound like they might be pretty fun. But again, these books seem like they're really hard to find, which seems to be true of a lot of her stuff. Things didn't seem to change for her in the 1950s. She became a textbook editor and her personal writing shifted slowly toward poetry. Apparently she edited, I guess there's one very small website in English dedicated to her. Apparently there's another one in Japanese, but I didn't really look at that. But her most notable contribution to pedagogy is this book called "The Outdoor Reference Guide", and it's basically a compendium of things about nature. Sounds like it'd be pretty cool to have around, I guess, especially if you're hiking and checking stuff out.

There's a poetry prize in Pennsylvania named after her, and she also became a curator at the William Penn Museum in Harrisburg, which is a position she kept until shortly before her death in 1978. One of her last works was to edit the 1977 Pennsylvania Poets Anthology Pennsylvania Poets, and she published a couple of chapbooks around then, which you can find on Amazon for about $250 if you so desire. There don't seem to be any digital editions of any of her poetry, but it is spoken of quite highly in some circles. So I was very curious to read some of it, but I couldn't find any. I don't know, I think that's really too bad.

Amelia didn't marry or have any children. In the 70s, the author Chet Williamson visited Amelia at her home and asked her about being a woman writing science fiction in the 30s. And Long said, "I don't think being a woman held me back with any of the science fiction magazines, but I'll tell you where it does hit you on the translation rights of certain countries, especially the Spanish American countries. If they know something is written by a woman, they'll simply give your initials and make believe you're a man. That used to annoy me. I know there was always that bugaboo of a woman writing for a man's magazine, but in Weird Tales in the science fiction magazines, I don't think it ever did make much difference."

But even though she did say that, she did write at least one story under the really cool byline, Mordred Weir. And quite a few of her mysteries were published under other names, specifically Patrick Laing and Adrian Reynolds. And I don't know, I find this weird because I just can't imagine, like, it was much harder to figure out who is who back then. And I just can't imagine, like, why would you do that if your fans are looking to read your work? They want to read your stuff. I guess she and many other writers have said that a reason they published under pseudonyms besides maybe that it was something that was different from their normal stuff. Although I don't get the impression that that was the case with Long's mysteries, but that they didn't want to glut the market with their things and they just wrote too fast, basically. And Stephen King basically said that about Richard Bachman is that that was one of the reasons. But there were other reasons for using Richard Bachman, too. And I don't know. 

I mean, to be fair, yes, through the 1940s, Amelia Reynolds Long had this really prolific period and she was churning out these books really fast. So maybe she just thought, yeah, look, or her publisher even just thought, well, if we spread it around a bit, people will be more likely to buy them because it's not like, oh, I already bought a book by Amelia Reynolds Long this year. I don't know. It's just it's just weird to me to 

Gretchen:

Not another Long. I guess I'll get a Lang instead.

JM:

Yeah, yeah. Again, publishers, if you're listening, please put out a compilation of at least the sci fi and weird stuff. It looks like she did publish a number of short stories in the detective magazines, too. I'd like to see those.

Nate:

Yeah, at least for the sci fi and weird stuff, you can track these down relatively easily as she got published in the big magazines like Weird Tales, Amazing and Astounding.

JM:

Yeah, as long as you can get those magazines, but yeah, sometimes they're just not very well scanned, not very... It's kind of a pain for normal people who are doing the kind of stuff that we're doing. Yeah, that is true. To get into it. I think I think that like, I mean, I thought there was a collection. I don't know why I thought that. I think I was maybe getting mixed up with some other writer who wrote for Weird Tales like Greye La Spina or something. But I'm like, I really, when I started this, I'm thinking, oh, there's Amelia Reynolds Long Collection, right? And then I couldn't find one. Then I even read a comment on a website where they were like, yeah, nobody has published Amelia Reynolds Long Collection. And in fact, I think where I read that was there was a Reddit thread about somebody a few years ago who found a whole bunch of or they were kind of given a bunch of her papers. And they were trying to figure out what to do with them. And apparently, yeah, they included rejection letters and drafts for stories and unpublished stuff and other correspondence. And yeah, it was noted somewhere there that there still hasn't been a collection and indeed I didn't find any. 

So I don't know, that's something she certainly has enough stories. Like if you go to amelialong.tripod.com, you can find a bibliography of all her stuff. But there's no actual, actual Amelia Reynolds Long content on there. It's just references to when they were published, whether they were published under her real name or not, and where they could be found if you so desire to look for them. But you have to kind of do your own work to get them.

Yeah, this story, I want to save most of the discussion for after but start with the usual. What do you guys make of this weird little story?

Nate:

I liked it. Yeah, I definitely liked it. And there's a lot going on here that, again, might be better to save towards the end. But it does have a lot of themes of religion involved. And it reminded me a little bit of the Graal Arelsky story that we covered a couple episodes ago, "Two Worlds", where somebody just makes them, makes themself God. And, you know, it plays out differently there than it does here. While I think I liked "Two Worlds" maybe a little more than this one, just because the atmosphere that was so weird and it ties to the other stories in a different way than this. This one wraps itself up a little more neatly than "Two Worlds" did. "Two Worlds" just kind of leaves you hanging on that weird end, whereas this definitely has like an ironic little bit where it kind of ties everything together in a way that I really, really like.

Gretchen:

I didn't think about the "Two Worlds" connection until you mentioned it. "Two Worlds" it leaves a little bit more ambiguity than this. I mean, I think that there's still a case to be made for exactly what direction you're supposed to think, but it does feel like "Two Worlds" is maybe a little vaguer in its message.

Nate:

Yeah. The other thing that it reminded me of is, I guess, a more real world example. And I guess it's interesting. We've been saying this entire time of how like historically prescient some of these stories are about predicting the trends that would come about in the latter half of the 20th century. But the idea of like two superpowers playing against each other using this like proxy sphere of a culture where they can kind of impose their ideas on to work against the other power very much reminded me of how the United States and the Soviet Union were playing against one another.

JM:

Not only that, but there's this like little guy in the middle. It's like the small nation or whatever that's kind of being like manipulated for both sides.

Nate:

Right. Right. Yeah, exactly. Yeah.

Gretchen:

Yeah, as someone who has been recently watching a lot of MASH.

Nate:

Yeah, right.

JM:

I've never seen mash.

Nate:

MASH is cool. Yeah.

Gretchen:

It's really cool. Yeah. It's about the Korean War. So it's definitely a prescient to think about that.

Nate:

Sure.

Gretchen:

Along with this story.

JM:

Yeah, I'd like to I guess I guess the fact that it was like a weird 70s comedy show maybe didn't really inspire me with much confidence that I would like it. But people keep saying there's a lot more to it than that and I kind of got curious to to check it out. But of all the stories in this magazine in this issue, this is the one that I wish was longer in some levels.

Nate:

Yeah, I could go for a novel of this for sure. I like her writing style. It has not only cool themes but cool imagery. And the fact that we get is on basically like a weird fantasy planet. I really like that setting and she does it well.

JM:

Me too. Yeah. I mean Leigh Brackett does that all the time. Yeah, for sure. So does Moore really but like it did kind of remind me more of Brackett. It's just because she writes like really well these like cultures that are kind of I guess they would be perceived as primitive to some outsiders, but they're aware of like people traveling from space and stuff like that. They're kind of like okay with it but they're either caught in the middle of it or they're trying to like use it to their advantage somehow and you get stories where people travel from other planets. But there's also swordplay and swashbuckling and you know, it's really cool. It's like the idea of the sword and planet right. 

Nate:

Yeah, for sure.

JM:

There's a bit of that in this but I guess like so I'm so conflicted about this story and I like that like they just made me think about it ever since I read it and I just keep thinking about it because I don't really know. First of all, I'm not 100% sure what it's trying to say but the fact that I keep wondering about it is neat. Like it makes it maybe more effective than a polemic right where you know what it's trying to say and you're just like yeah okay like I get it right. The fact that it makes you wonder the fact that it's not very long so it has to kind of hint at a lot of things and you're not very sure of certain relationships and you're not really sure exactly what happened at certain points right and it's just like on the one hand I wish it was longer but on the other hand, maybe it's kind of ingenious that it's just short like this. I don't know.

Gretchen:

I was going to say that I do agree that it would be interesting to read this in a longer form and you know like a novellette or a novel. But I do kind of respect that it's this length and I think that it's still a good length for this story and the fact that it leaves some of those things sort of up to interpretation is interesting.

Nate:

It has a punch and I like that.

JM:

And the fact that she was so into poetry, I mean not that you can't have long poems but like it looks like the majority of her poems and the poem that she specifically refers to in this story is quite short. And it delivers something that makes you think and that gets out and maybe that's good because maybe even again like some of the audience of the time would have thought about this probably very differently than we think about it right now.

So in my summary of the story, which I'm about to do, I guess the question that I have, which I will pose to you guys is, is the story she's written the same as the story I had in my head? Like, am I kind of extrapolating things from a story that may not actually be there or did she mean them to be there? I kind of, I'm hoping for the latter but like I read the poem that she refers to in the story and while it seems to be a good poem, I'm not really sure how it connects to the story. So after the story, I'll read the poem because it's quite short and we'll see if we can figure it out.

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spoiler summary and discussion, "Geography for Time Travelers" non-fiction article

JM:

Venus is a planet of interest from both the Martian and terrestrial perspectives and they both got settlements there and both seem interested in the radium and perhaps other precious materials available and have successfully convinced the native people to mine for them.

The Venusians, blue people, live what seems to be a primitive tribal existence among all this technological imported splendor and they're technically under protection from Earth. But this is probably because of some treaty or other that maybe, who knows, maybe they didn't really know what they were signing. But they know the Martians can't be trifled with and our story opens with Spors, the Martian, trying a new scheme of exploitation.

Nate:

His name is Spors Rok, which is like an awesome name. Because they certainly do.

JM:

And this story has the best opening of the magazine, in my opinion, it's like you start reading it and you're like right away this guy's scheming and he's thinking about religion and how it can be used to control people and how it's really excellent for this purpose. And it's just so good, like it's so great of a hook to make you be like, yeah, I want to read more of this and it's like the opposite, even though I defended that story, it's kind of the opposite of the way I felt about the Ross Rocklynne where I was like, I mean, I kind of like the beginning because I like the beginning of things but like by the end I was kind of, yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, okay, I'm going to finish this soon.

Nate:

Right.

JM:

It's good. This one is like, oh, I want, I want more of this, I want more of the world, I guess. So Ambella, the chief of this tribe of blue people, might be an even mightier king if he worshiped the new Martian God instead of their usual stone image, Lalu. At first, Ambella won't hear of this blasphemy, making the sign of the egg to protect both himself and his ignorant brother from the red planet who's come to visit him with this proposal. 

And it's really awesome the way she describes both the encounter with the Martian and the encounter with the earth people because it's so like political scheming and...

Nate:

Тotally, yeah.

JM:

She makes it really clear that the chief is actually a really, really smart person and everything he says kind of has a double meaning. But he points out that Lalu kept the tribe fed when their neighbors crops failed and therefore he must be a real and good God. But Spors, the Martian, says, oh no, it's your own cleverness in industry that resulted in their good yield. And because of your cleverness, I have decided to reward you with a true thing. I am a God. In fact, all of us Martian people are really gods and obedience will be rewarded with power. 

But first, Spors must prove himself because Ambella is no fool. So he tries various things and first he says, well, no Venusian has ever seen a dead Martian. Why do you think that is? And the counter that Ambella has is just because I haven't seen a thing that doesn't mean it doesn't happen, which is like very, very logical, right? And Spors says he will demonstrate by destroying Lalu the stone god while proving that the Martians can't be killed. 

So meet me at the temple at noon tomorrow and that's exactly what they do. And Venusians come from many miles away to see the spectacle, expecting Spors to be killed and blasted to smithereens for his blasphemy. And this is really funny. So here is where the Martian Spors actually proves that he's a study of, he's been studying his 19th century American poets because he refers to a poem written by Ralph Waldo Elberson called "Give All to Love", although it's not named in the story. And I did have to look it up because I didn't have this knowledge, but I definitely was like, well, where did she get that from? Where did he get that from? I must find out, right?

But there's a terrestrial saying, "when the half gods go, the gods will arrive." And it's very unwise for Spors to be using this saying at this time because obviously he doesn't really understand the true implications because he views, I don't know, the stone idol as a half god, I guess. He's trying to set up that dichotomy. 

So he takes out his little tube that makes goodbye forever and vaporizes the icon of Lalu, which is this really big towering stone thing. So the fact that it's vaporized is quite a significant event, causes quite a lot of chaos. And everyone is horrified. And then he turns the ray on himself and bathes in its killing fire, but nothing happens to him. So it must be true then. 

Well, just so happens that Spors garments are made from Ethereum, the only known substance in the universe that can withstand disintegrator rays. And even though the way this was done and written was a little bit silly, it was still kind of awesome. I don't know. It's like, oh, you think you could kill me, but my clothes are made from Ethereum, you see? But it's kind of unusual because he's like turning the rays on himself, right? So he's trying to show how indestructible he really is.

But of course, Ambella doesn't need to know about the Ethereum. And indeed, he kneels before the Martian and pronounces him divine. So the Venusians then start changing their attitudes at the behest of their new overlords. There's no more trading with the terrestrials, and any human caught in their territory will be killed on site.

So now we get the perspective of some humans complaining about all this. We have a commander Fox and a sub-commander O'Connell, who's a wonderfully hilarious Irish stereotype. And sub-commander Schneider, whose first name is Adolf. O'Connell in this comical Irish brogue suggests dropping some itch bombs on the Venusians to keep them occupied for a while. And I don't know, I thought it was cool her making a reference to biological warfare and stuff. Again, not something that had really been used too much. I mean, obviously we had our muster gas and stuff like that in the First World War, which was like chemical weapons, but this sounds more like it's not really gone into in the story very much, but there's definitely lots of hints of biological achiness in this story, which is pretty cool.

And the commander then mirrors though, he says there is apparently an interplanetary court, and Earth might lose its protectorate status if they're not careful. And in that case, it would be ceded over to the Martians, because the Venusians clearly need protecting, obviously. And they've heard there's a new god in town, and while they don't know what it is exactly, they seem pretty sure that the Martians are behind it.

So O'Connell knows that the Venusians are now handing over all their radium to the Martians instead of to the humans, who used to buy it at what they thought was a fair price. Wow, the nerve. Schneider grumbles about religion being a huge pain in the ass all around, but O'Connell tells him to fuck off with your atheism pretty much. It's kind of amusing, like again, I wouldn't have minded if the story were longer and kind of got into these guys' relationship a little more, but it's pretty interesting that she sets them apart, as you know, there's the one guy who's like this cool rationalist almost, but he has some pretty good philosophical ideas, and then there's the kind of silly Irishman who's a traditionalist and smokes a pipe and believes in God, and then there's the commander who's trying to kind of deal with the two of them and regulate things, but he also gets sick, which we'll talk about in a minute, so he can't really do very much.

But yeah, that's why it turns out Venus is pretty dangerous for humans. There are a combination of weird fevers, creatures like brain-sucking anteaters that drop from the trees, giant lizards that fly around, and very Hodgsonian-fungal infestations that can turn a man into a stinking walking slime mold. So that's pretty gross. I wouldn't have minded seeing some of that stuff, but it's cool that she hints that it's there. It's this background, really. Yeah, the fungus people are called the dough-men, by the way, and it seems like the best thing you can do for them is to kill them on site, because I guess they're suffering and they'll never be properly human again.

But we do get an example of one of the Venusian fevers, which is contracted by Mr. Fox, and it's too bad, but he has to be confined to quarters since the fever makes everybody who suffers it believe they are winged lizards, and so they all try to fly off of buildings and such.

Nate:

Yeah, definitely one of her touches of humor with that one.

JM:

Yeah, it's like... It is kind of weird because I have no idea how many people are in this settlement, like we never see anybody else, so it really seems like there's just a three of them, but there must be more than that, it seems like it's just these three doing everything, in the story at least. But it seems like Schneider is the man for the job to go over to the Venusian village nearby, because O'Connell's too hung up about teaching these blue devils a lesson, and he must find out what the trouble is without antagonizing the Venusians. So these humans really care about their radium, or the Venusians don't seem to know what it is, which is interesting. It kind of reminds me of some stuff from Blake 7's Federation, and the kind of things that they would do, just like make people mine stuff and not give them even the knowledge of what it does or what it's for or why they could use it themselves.

You know, it's kind of one of these things that makes me wonder, like, are we supposed to be as mad at the humans for their particular exploitation? I kind of feel like some of Campbell's audience probably wouldn't have picked that, like they wouldn't have really thought that way, they would have probably thought, it's okay what the humans are doing because we're a little bit kinder and nicer, but I don't know, I think there's enough hints in here that it's kind of equal, but we still kind of, I think, are meant to favor the humans a little bit.

So O'Connell says, keep your tongue away from atheism, but while Fox is trying mainly to fly around his room, O'Connell's working to subdue him, and basically being a nurse, but Schneider flies to the village in the base's rocket plane. So after two weeks, they haven't heard from Schneider. Again, yeah, I don't know how big this colony is that O'Connell has to play a nursemaid, but during that time, they completely forgot about Schneider, and 15 days later, the commander was like, hey, what happened to Schneider?

In this really adorable detail that I just love, the plane that Schneider was on doesn't have any radio, but he did have a bunch of carrier pigeons. I don't know, I'm not coming down on Long for being silly. I just think it's cool kind of in a weird way. I'm not really fathoming it. Maybe, I don't know, maybe radios...

Gretchen:

I love picturing just where a radio would be just a cage, and there's a couple pigeons in there.

Nate:

Yeah, I don't know, maybe radio doesn't work properly in the atmosphere of Venus, but I don't know, I'd be kind of worried about these pigeons in the dangerous Venusian fauna coming around.

Nate:

Getting eaten by a fungus monster, whatever.

JM:

Getting swept up by a flying lizards. Your messages probably would never get through. But according to one of the terrestrial and trader sources, the Venusians have cut off trade with Mars now too. So what the hell's going on? Fox decides that they'll take the bigger plane armed with a disintegrator ray to investigate. Schneider's been the guest of the Venusians for two weeks, it turns out. But he doesn't seem to know much, just that there have been some meetings, including with Spors the Martian, who was by a couple of times, and since the most recent one was just last night, they haven't seen any Martian flyers take off, that means that they conclude he must be there now still. And they ask Ambella to take them to him, and he happily agrees.

But Fox is agonizing over tactical shit, and what's the right thing to say? And there's a manual for dealing with primitives, and they're trying to follow their proper directives here. But they're brought to a guest house and made to wait, and Fox thinks they will be forced to sign something, like sign over the rights of the human race. I guess the Martian will probably make them do that. And obviously the Venusians have already signed away all their rights a long time ago, but the humans sit there for hours eating the weird Venusian food and drinking their milk. And then they hear a sound. The Venusian rattle language, and Schneider pronounces it words of sacrifice. And he knows them of old days, when the Venusians were still cannibals. But there's something strange about them. Usually the rattles tell the name of the god the sacrifice is made to, but not this time. Of course the men think the sacrifice means them.

O'Connell is belligerent, and they decide to try to act subdued until two of them can make a break for the plane and the disintegrator. Fox is sure the Martian is still responsible, but that no matter what happens, he'll get off scot-free, that is the Martian, whether the men escape or not. But then, and by now it's night by the way, but then there's a scream in the night, and it's a terrible sound. And a while later, Ambella comes in looking all haggard, but acting with deference and respect toward the Terrans. And Fox thinks it must be alright. And they go to Ambella's hut for a meal. And he even pulls out the stash of pretzels, so his guests will feel at home.

It's here that Ambella explains what happened, and how they gave Spors the Martian, the Ultimatum, and the ultimate test of finally killing him. And this actually isn't revealed to the very end, but I don't know, I mean, no shit they killed him. I don't know, I read a review mentioning the story, and they said that was a twist, and I feel like that wasn't really, I don't know, I would have probably reorganized the ending a little bit if it were me, and just been like, we know that's what happened, right? I think the ultimate revelation is not necessarily that the Martian was killed, but the explanation of why, and that is the supposed atheism of Schneider that got Ambella to thinking, and he said that his Schneider was telling him either, I guess before, maybe, before he arrived two weeks ago, I'm not sure exactly when they had this conversation, but...

Nate:

Yeah, they would have had a while.

JM:

I guess so, I mean, it seems like Schneider spent some time among the Venusians, so even before that two-week period. Yeah, I mean, he knows their language, so... He knows their language, right, and he knows even the more secret religious language, which is the rattles. But he said there was no God that you can see or touch, and if God exists, it's not like that at all. And Ambella gets this, though maybe it took a while, and he's talking about natural law, and that's what he calls it.

So having either humans wait in the hut all day at night was really a political masterstroke, in my opinion. It just sets up the atmosphere of dread, and they don't know what's going to happen, and they think they're for the chopping block, right? And it's like, you know, Ambella is really, really cunning, and he knows what he's doing, and the thing is you can look at it this in two ways. You can say, oh, yeah, here's the settlers telling the Venusians that they should disregard their traditional ways and their religion, but I don't know, I would say as an atheist, maybe, I guess, but that kind of demonstrating that, yeah, if there is a God in the universe, it's not going to be like this thing that you can put your hands on directly or that you can, like, talk to and expect a response back. It's going to be something more abstract. In my opinion, that's not necessarily a, I don't know what's the word, like a manipulative thing to do. Like, I don't know, in my opinion, anyway. I mean, I suppose others might disagree.

Nate:

Well, I think it can be both for the Earth people who are the American stand-ins here where they're using it to political advantage, for sure. But at the same time, the Martians just showed up and started blowing up their idols and statues and probably trying to get them to do exploitative labor or whatever Spors Rok has planned for the Venetians. So when the little doubts are planted in Ambella's mind, I'm sure a test, you know, well, what happens if you just stab him in the chest? Sounds simple enough because, you know, if he's not a God, he's blown up your religion and disrespected your entire tribe and probably made you do bad things. And if he is a God, well, he won't die and it really won't matter.

Gretchen:

Yeah, I think that, you know, like you said, it could be a manipulative tactic on the human side to be like, oh, well, there isn't like a tangible God in order to get rid of Spors. But it's also used then by the Venusians to be like, well, now that we know that, you should watch your step because we're not going to fall for that kind of thing with you as well.

JM:

Yeah, it could be. I mean, maybe Schneider is just, again, like, if the story were longer, we might get a more, I guess, well-rounded sense of these characters. Like, I don't know how much Schneider is doing this kind of out of a sense of goodness or out of like altruism because, again, it seems like it's actually the sense of the natural law gives the Venetians a hell of a lot of power because now they could be like, yeah, see what happens to this guy from Mars, right? And the thing is, Amela is acting all like bowing and scraping, right? Like, it's a little bit embarrassing. It's a little bit over the top. But it's like he knows it, right? And it's like, again, that double meaning thing, like on the surface, he seems very obsequious. But underneath, it's almost like he's saying, yeah, by the way, you better not mess with us because we're smarter than you think and now we understand this. At least I do. And I'm the leader of my people. So if you dare to mess with us in a way that's remotely similar to what this guy was trying to do, this is what's in store for you.

Meanwhile, I mean, yeah, I'm sure he knows that the Earthlings have all these like weapons and stuff that they could turn against them. But it seems like there's some kind of interplanetary law system that they have to follow. So Commander Fox is not going to step too far out of line, I guess. And I don't know. This is really interesting political implications, I think.

Nate:

Definitely.

JM:

And again, you can really see, like, in all the obsequious bowing and scraping again, it kind of reads like, oh, it's the tribal chieftain and he's acting all contrite and everything like that. But like, why would he really be contrite? He's not. He's not. He's just acting. And again, it's part of the act and they act all day long. These people were sitting in this hut with this strange food that they mostly couldn't eat and like all these weird sounds going on and they didn't dare leave because they'd be breaching the protocol and you could just sitting picture them sitting there sweating and like getting more and more uneasy about their situation. Like, don't tell me he didn't do all that on purpose.

Gretchen:

Yeah, I mean, it's just like Ambella, the Venusians, they also have understood they've grasped that politics, you can say one thing and do another. Just like I'm sure the Earth people and the Martians do.

Nate:

And they're probably getting tired of all these foreign Earth people and Martians just showing up and making a mess out of their Venusian village.

JM:

Right. And making the mine radium like for what?

Nate:

Yeah, right.

JM:

So they can send it off.

Nate:

Yeah.

JM:

Like, you know, it's not like, oh, you can use this to, I don't know, care cancer or something like that.

Nate:

Yeah.

JM:

It's just not, there's not even any thought about it. Like it's just, yeah, they're a primitive culture. They'll sell it to us for pretty much nothing.

Nate:

Right.

JM:

And even the humans take that for granted. As much as I think we're supposed to be sort of on their side. I'm just not sure how much, you know what I mean?

Nate:

Right. Right.

Gretchen:

Yeah. I mean, we're supposed to relate to them more than Spors, obviously, but I still think we're supposed to see what they're doing and come out on the side of Ambella the most.

JM:

Right. Yeah. I guess so. I mean, she definitely seems to be emphasizing how Ambella is always the smartest person in the room. And I don't think she would really do that if she wanted us to completely be like, yeah, it's better to be exploited by humans than Martians and that's that. Right.

Gretchen:

Yeah. You better hope that the people that colonize you are as nice as these people.

Nate:

Right.

JM:

Yeah. I'm going to read the poem by Emerson because I want to, I don't really know how this connects the story. And again, like, I think it's cool that her love of poetry is coming through here. I just don't know. I mean, I'll make a comment at the end, but I don't really, I don't know. I'm not sure. I'm not sure. This seems like a transcendental kind of poem about, I guess, mysticism and religion. 

Give all to love;

Obey thy heart;

Friends, kindred, days,

Estate, good-fame,

Plans, credit and the Muse,—

Nothing refuse.


’T is a brave master;

Let it have scope:

Follow it utterly,

Hope beyond hope:

High and more high

It dives into noon,

With wing unspent,

Untold intent:

But it is a god,

Knows its own path

And the outlets of the sky.


It was never for the mean;

It requireth courage stout.

Souls above doubt,

Valor unbending,

It will reward,—

They shall return

More than they were,

And ever ascending.


Leave all for love;

Yet, hear me, yet,

One word more thy heart behoved,

One pulse more of firm endeavor,—

Keep thee to-day,

To-morrow, forever,

Free as an Arab

Of thy beloved.


Cling with life to the maid;

But when the surprise,

First vague shadow of surmise

Flits across her bosom young,

Of a joy apart from thee,

Free be she, fancy-free;

Nor thou detain her vesture’s hem,

Nor the palest rose she flung

From her summer diadem.


Though thou loved her as thyself,

As a self of purer clay,

Though her parting dims the day,

Stealing grace from all alive;

Heartily know,

When half-gods go,   

The gods arrive.

I don't know. I don't really, I think that's a really cool poem, but I don't really see a lot of love in the story. So I'm not sure. You know, I'm not sure if she just really liked the poem and wanted to work it in there.

Nate:

I think so. Yeah, I think that line probably just stuck out in her head. I mean, it's like murder most foul from "Hamlet". That line probably stuck out in her head and she probably thought, well, I'll make a good title for a story.

JM:

Yeah. Yeah, I guess so. Yeah. I don't know. Like I was kind of looking for a deeper meaning in that and I don't really find it necessarily because I don't kind of suggesting that you can sacrifice a lot of things for the sake of love. And even though they might be things that you're used to and things that you really like a lot and things that you thought were really important in your life, it'll be worth in the end not having those things because you'll have the love that's important.

But I don't really see what I don't see the connection to the story. I don't know.

Nate:

And I don't know if there is one, but.

JM:

Yeah, I guess not. I don't know. Again, maybe that's something that could have been worked out if she wanted to like this could have been a serial. Yeah, or at least one of the longer stories in the magazine. I would swap this out for the Schachner maybe. Yeah. Make it longer.

Gretchen:

Yeah.

JM:

Even though that Schachner wasn't bad, but like, yeah, I don't know.

Gretchen:

I do enjoy this more than the Schachner.

Nate:

Definitely. Yeah, I would say so. Yeah. I like the ironic Twilight Zone type ending. I'm glad that it ended on that note.

JM:

Yeah. I mean, I just love that in the end this ended up being a story that I thought about a lot. And it's really interesting because like, it kind of reminds me of the Asimov in that it's posing a thought problem or something for you to ponder over. And I guess even though I can see why even from "Trends", like it's an early story, it's maybe not one of Asimov's very best, but I mean, I can see why he became a legendary story writer and especially short story writer. And maybe I don't get that sense quite from this, but at the same time, this story actually fascinated me a little more in a weird way, like, because I just kept coming back to it in my head and going like, well, what does she mean? Right.

Nate:

Yeah. Right.

JM:

And I just, I like that. Like, and in a way it can seem like vagueness from the author. If you're like, particularly picky, I guess, and like want more explanations. But I think there's something to be said for something that just gets you to think about something and doesn't necessarily give you a clear answer. Right. And this is something that the people who maybe are a little more like, I don't know, gong ho about space colonization and then like colonization in general and say like, oh yeah, well, if we have to step on some natives, so be it. This is something that they could read and not necessarily be offended by but still kind of think about and be like, well, that's kind of interesting that this chieftain is really that canyon perceptive, right? And he knows what's going on around him. Maybe more than the controlling powers do. The colonial powers, I guess.

The story "Reverse Phylogeny" that I also read does include a bit of an Indian chieftain stereotype as well. But it's kind of a funny story. It's actually a story about a guy who uses mesmerism to bring back memories of ancient Atlantis. And he believes that the native peoples of the Americas have the closest insight into what Atlantis actually was. So it's kind of, I don't know, it's interesting. It's definitely meant to be humorous. And I kind of think it succeeds at that. I can't remember if it's Mike Ashley who compiled "Sisters of Tomorrow". I think he was involved with it, didn't he? I don't know. He says that the stereotype is kind of regrettable. And I can kind of see what he's getting at.

And then, you know, there's a little bit of perhaps unfortunate language in this story too. Like Ambella is always referring to the humans, especially Fox anyway, as his white father. And so I guess, you know, the Venusians are blue, the Martians are red, and the Earthmen are all white, I guess. And that's, I don't know, I guess that's the thing. But I don't know, it's of its time, I guess. It doesn't seem malicious necessarily. It's just a thing that I guess one would have to be aware of. There's a ton of colonial language in this story. But I do think she's trying to provide some thought and nuance.

Nate:

Yeah, it's definitely not a pro-colonialism story, like the flag-waving stuff we saw in the dime novel era.

JM:

Right.

Gretchen:

Yeah, like there's definitely more nuance, more depth to what's going on. It's not unapologetically pro-colonialism.

JM:

Yeah, I mean, there's certainly enough ambiguity there. And I think, again, the shortness helps. Like, I don't know, maybe if it were longer, like, maybe I don't want to know exactly what Long thinks about this subject. But I don't know, it's just, it's an interesting, very specifically nuanced and pointed portrayal. And it is very short, which could be a weakness, but also a strength. So, again, I'm conflicted. But at the end of the day, I liked it a lot. I think it's really cool.

Nate:

Yeah, I did too.

Gretchen:

And of course, whatever Long was trying to say, there's always death of the author.

Nate:

Yeah, right.

JM:

Yeah.

Gretchen:

That's always something to fall back on.

JM:

So, Charles Hornig, in the book "Pioneers of Wonder", he gets interviewed and he talks about going to visit Amelia Reynolds Long. And it's just kind of a funny anecdote. I don't think it really means anything. But it seems like almost like the way we saw in the fanzines where, like, a bunch of people visited Sam Moskowitz and they were unannounced. And, like, he was kind of a little bit nonplussed because all these weird science fiction fans just showed up at his house.

So, I guess, Hornig and Julius Schwartz, I think, were hanging out in Pennsylvania, like, somewhere doing something. They decided that they were just going to stop him at the Amelia Reynolds Long household. And so they did. And he said she answered the door, looking like somebody out of the 1860s. She was dressed in a very old-fashioned way. And he's like, she looks like somebody out of Lincoln's era or something like that. She had these, like, buttoned-down shoes and she was wearing... I can't remember what he said she was wearing, but she wasn't prepared to admit them because she wasn't expecting any guests. And he said she wouldn't look them in the eye and she didn't let them in. And, I don't know, he thought that was strange. But, I mean, I get it. They're just showing up at your house, right? Like, you expect her to be nice to you.

Nate:

Right, yeah.

JM:

Just like random people showing up.

Gretchen:

I definitely don't like people showing up unannounced.

JM:

Me neither. Yeah. Yeah.

Gretchen:

Perhaps that describes her enjoyment of Emerson as someone who seems to appreciate the mid-1800s.

Nate:

Yeah, certainly.

JM:

Yeah. I'm glad that we all like this and we kind of come to a consensus about it. Like, it was kind of one of these stories that I was really wondering about, because, again, it's so short and it doesn't deliver a polemic, so it doesn't tell you how you're supposed to think about it. And I think that's the best thing about it, maybe, in the end.

Nate:

Yeah.

JM:

It's not a story I'm gonna forget, even though it might seem inconsequential in some aspects because of its brevity and because it's, like, tackling a very large subject in so few words. Again, sometimes that's the power of a short story, is that it can do things like that a novel can't necessarily do. So, good job. I'm sorry she stopped writing sci-fi not long after this. I wish she had, but people go through phases and they just do what they have to do, and I don't know, I'd be curious to read some of those mysteries. The titles are a little bit cliche, but they sound fun.

Nate:

Definitely.

JM:

Yeah, so... And, yeah, there's somebody who's kind of going against the grain as well of, like, what was popular. Although I shouldn't really say that because Agatha Christie was also very popular, really.

Nate:

Certainly, yeah.

JM:

It's just not, it's not very American, like, that the hardboiled style is what people know from this era. Because writers like Raymond Chandler and Dashiell Hammett were trying to set themselves apart from those kind of British mystery traditions. Raymond Chandler himself was famously not a fan of Agatha Christie and wrote this very long essay describing exactly why he wasn't. But... I love Raymond Chandler and, I don't know, I haven't read a lot of Agatha Christie, but she seems cool. So, it's just different, I guess. It's a different thing for different moods.

So, all right, well, I think we have one more nonfiction article before the last story.

Nate:

I guess we want to briefly talk about that.

JM:

Yeah, so let's talk about Willy Ley. He was a German scientist, really. He was born in 1906. And in the 1920s, he actually was the vice president of the amateur German rocket group. He has another name, the VFR, but it's German and I'm not going to try and say it right now because I didn't actually write it down. But, yeah, he was really into rocketry. He studied several different sciences from physics to various aspects of biology, including zoology.

The funny thing was one of the reasons he despised Nazism was that he thought that it was contributing to the rise of pseudoscience in Germany, but he was really into this cryptozoology stuff. Like, in 1949, he wrote a book called "Do Prehistoric Monsters Really Exist" or something like that. Or, "Do They Exist Now?" Like, kind of thing. And he was really, really into this. So, it just kind of goes to show that everybody has their little weakness, you know, they're like, you can talk about pseudoscience as much as you want and talk about how much it sucks, but you probably like some weird, kooky thing that not everybody is into.

But, in the early 30s, there was not as much interest in rocketry as in the 20s in Germany. And he had to deal with a ton of bureaucracy. He ended up working for a bank and when he was working there, he apparently fabricated some documents and just kind of left and went to England and then made his way to the United States where, over the next 20 years, he became a very popular, popular science guy. And if you look on YouTube now, you can see Willy Ley in a whole bunch of TV broadcasts from the 1950s. And he seems like the popular science guy from back then, people would have known his face for sure. Looks like he was all over.

Interestingly, he was also the advisor for the rocketry stuff in Fritz Lang's film, "The Woman in the Moon". And Fritz Lang spoke very, very highly of Willy's work and said that it was so realistic that the Gestapo showed up in 1937 to seize all the copies or something like that. And, yeah, interestingly, both Ley and Fritz Lang were both German emigres who pretty much fled the country when they saw Nazism was really taking over and ended up in the United States. And both had pretty successful careers there in their way.

Ley was a really big fan of science fiction and he was a guest of the Worldcon in, I believe it was 1958 or 59. And, yeah, kind of an interesting guy for sure. Interesting listening to his science broadcasts, like he's got the thick German accent and everything like that and the deep voice and just talking about rockets and all this cool stuff. And it's a 1950s. People are getting kind of more enthusiastic about this stuff. One thing that, so Isaac Asimov knew him and they were both part of this club in New York and it was all men kind of just, they would just hang out over dinner and talk about stuff. And Asimov actually created a series of mystery. It's basically a series of mystery short stories called the "Black Widowers Club". And these stories were stories about these guys who would get together, they would eat and usually somebody would show up, somebody would invite a guest, and the guest or one of the club members would have some kind of problem or mystery or a big thing that needed to be solved and the guys would sit around the table and argue about this stuff for quite some time until the waiter who's been quietly walking around setting the tables and clearing the tables and making sure their wine's filled and they've all got bourbon and whatnot clears his throat and solves the problem for them.

These stories were apparently based on this real life club. I'm sure there wasn't that particular mystery angle with the waiter and everything, but the type of people who were there were like, yeah, people like Willy Ley and he speaks about Willy with some affection and his big regret was that Willy died in 1969 less than a month before Mad Men landed on the moon. It's just like he would have loved to have seen that so much.

It just kind of reminds me of that scene in Mad Men where there's the big advertising guy who's like the old guy and he finally sees the moon landing and then he dies and it's like the apex of his life and what he was looking forward to and is like, it's kind of a funny moment in the show but it's actually quite poignant when you think about it. Somebody who has dedicated their whole life to science and rocketry in particular and space travel who wrote tons of books about this stuff and popular science articles all over the place and this is exactly what he would have lived to see and the fact that he didn't make it by such a short margin is a little bit sad.

Nate:

It is, yeah.

JM:

The article we have is "Geology for Time Travelers" and it is a response to L. Sprague de Camps, "Language for Time Travelers", which although I didn't end up reading it it seems like it is probably a more interesting article than this.

Nate:

Yeah, this is just an excessively detailed article explaining what continental drift is. I mean, it goes on for way, way, way too long.

JM:

Yeah. I do like the way it starts out, reading like a science fiction story.

Gretchen:

I was going to bring that up. That was an interesting way to start.

JM:

Yeah, like at first I thought I was wrong and I was like, oh, I thought this was an article. Isn't this an article? And it's like, it's a story. Oh, he's just setting up the, okay, I got it. Yeah.

Gretchen:

Looks like we missed a story.

JM:

Yeah, I mean, it's unfortunate. Like I appreciate his enthusiasm for the subject and everything but it is pretty dull. Yeah. I didn't really get anything from it.

Nate:

Yeah. Yeah. I guess with that said, should we move on to Moore?

JM:

Yeah, so let's finally discuss the final story. 

Bibliography:

Science Fiction Encyclopedia - "Amelia Reynolds Long" https://sf-encyclopedia.com/entry/long_amelia_reynolds

Simms, Richard - "A Tribute to Amelia Reynolds Long" amelialong.tripod.com

Yaszek, Lisa - "Sisters of Tomorrow: The First Women of Science Fiction" (2016)

Introduction and story index

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